Go with the flow

My crony told me

About her life quote

"Go with the flow"

Has I heard it

From her own voice

My soul began to petrify

And I can't understand why?

An expression of ideas

A motto of a reality

A phrase of a message

A word of a choice

And quote of a challenge

Sometimes, I made a decision

That makes me upset

I even lose a hope easily

Or close my ears

From a spectral noise

An uproar makes me down

A rattle makes me crack

And a noise makes me crash

Because Life is like a river rapids

That, you need to hold on

So you won't fall.

But all of this things is a reality

Still, Let's make it easy

Just like her quote

"Go with the flow"

Author's Note

Inspired from an advice of a friend (Azenath) <3 enjoy! ;)
and may last poem this month!

Reviews

[Mak Goalie]

its can dissuade some one to fall in front of life.........i dnt know is it gud or bad........

[Brittany]

A message for all of us. Thanks for expressing it with your poetry. Lovely piece.

[SUGATA M]

This made me think for a while to grasp your state of mind that pushed you pen this piece. I am still thinking, 'Am I also going with the flow?' Probably all of us, but sometimes some of us dare to rebel to go against it.....thank you to remind me about our commonness. Keep it up....

[dan nacario]

great message..good choice of words

[emman]

hahaha..I don't agree about GO WITH THE FLOW concept of living..just my opinion..

the poem is nice..realism :)

[MoriartyMesa]

I love the images that you bring to the mind with your work. Maybe I am just silly, but there was something that kind of made me think of something like a roller skating ring and two people dancing...........



Let me guess, I am way off

[Pax]

Go with the flow, this is one of my principles in life, just go through life like the wind like a free spirited individual. Nice!