Be Strong

Simple but Complex

A simple  advice

A common  syllable

A powerful  phrase

But, adorable expression

 

I  couldn’t  explain why!

I  felt  floating in the sky

I’ll  keep my eyes open

That  makes me believe

 

Your  gentle whisper

Speech about truth

I began to confuse

So, close your eyes

 

To realize,

“Every time, I feel down;

Just recall this advice”

Because my spirit flows

In you… Always 

Author's Note

I hope you like.. this.. it seems.. I'm less often write poems.. ahah maybe because I'm just excited this coming first day of class in July.. ahha anyway ENJOY!.. friendship poem again :)

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

My goodness your friends inspire wonderful creations from you. All have a message and are for a reason you have chosen to write for... and just where can one find friends so wonderful? I sure would love to meet one or two myself... Always love to read your inspiring poems. Thank you for the RR. :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

Sweet peice.. Short and simple, to the point, well done :)

[Poppie Mira]

Simple and nicely done!

[afra]

well done ...keep writing

[Amata Luna]

Yeah right. :)) Another poem for a friend. I was thinking who inspired you this time? ;) Thanks for sharing this Kuhr. Nice. :D

[dan nacario]

very inspiring..nicely done

[Coyote Poetry]

Wise words in this poem. "Be strong". Stand your ground and never bow to no-one. I like the thoughts in the amazing poem.
Coyote

[luna11]

I like it. It's simple, but well written.
Well done :)

[w]

Not a bad piece. Very basic, but gets its point across. As a side note, the font is horrible and hard to read.

[Emrick]

Honestly,this is Wow.