My Love For You

Just a little bit of writing that I started but never really finished...not sure I ever will.

My heart withers each day;

Never receiving word of you.

Oh, endless torment!

Wanting, but never obtaining;

Thoughts of you echo in my mind.

How my heart sighs!

Come to me, O, my love;

Join your hand with mine.

My love for you shines bright!

Reviews

[Eddie Davis]

A very nice, somewhat old-fashioned feel to this poem. Nicely done.

[Elina]

Thank you, Eddie.