Took

Howdy, I'm new here! You can call me Silver! This is not the first poem I'm writing, but the first one I'm sharing. Hope you like it!

So I took my notebook to write

A sudden creative rush took over me

What took me this long anyway?

It took a while to get the words right

It took research to get the rhymes clear

But it took no effort to brighten my day!

Author's Note

So, what do you think of the theme word? Is it too repetitive? Does it distract a little from the rhymes? Should I have picked another word?
What about the line organization? Does the rhythm work fine? Should the rhymes be closer together?
Don't mind it being too short, because that's all I could write in my tiny notepad page.

Reviews

[adichie]

I think the theme word is unique, and all your own. It feels like a lovely silk scarf tied securely, yet floating on a breeze, intriguing and delighting the reader. :):)

Adix