it stops now

She always uses

My  things to

Do what she wants

Well it is

Going to stop

Right

Now

I have had

Enough of her

Using my stuff

IT STOPS NOW

She will never use

My stuff again

EVER

You see,

I know things

That i should not

Know

I know all

About her lies

To many people

I know how to

Bring her down

Because I know

Her

She has just

Made me a enemy

And that is the

Worst thing that

You can do

EVER

I am not someone

You want to make

Mad

Because when I am

Mad,

I show no

Mercy

EVER

Author's Note

what do u think?

Reviews

[Bluefire]

This made me think of a sister or a bitchy friend who likes to walk all over you and use up all your stuff. It was kind of funny in a way, or maybe I'm just over tired. Roaches are funny right now, I have one in my house almost as big as my chihuahua. Anyway, nice write!

[Angel of the devil]

thanks bluefire

[Bluefire]

No problem

[barleygirl]

I think you've done a very good job of showing us the vindictive nature of the narrator. This is well-crafted, the way it builds from low-level annoyance to declaring all-out war. Frankly, I'm not "into" such a negative message, but it's well done for the genre. I think it's a waste of time getting mad at people. It's a big wide world, & let's just move on. I'm hoping all your writing is not steeped in this dark blood.

[Pete]

Wow. I don't want to get on your bad side. Very honest emotion. Nice job.

[Angel of the devil]

yea, thanks