Clouds

We watch in awe and gently sigh
As they torment us from the sky
And bring with them a looming threat
Of making hopeful spirits wet

Without a glance they amble by
Caring not for you & I
We live beneath their iron reign
And have to weather their disdain

We feign consent and bow our heads
And wrap our naked skin in threads
I paint a landscape where they're gone
And fill my lungs to blow them on

Reviews

[faked.reality]

I really like this! good job!

[lily]

This is very beautiful. I love the way your words flow. I hope to see more from you :)

[SimonThePoet]

Thank you very much :-)

[Frank James]

Awesome poem, great choice of words and very visual. Seem pretty advanced in poetry

[SimonThePoet]

Thanks very much! Just getting to grips with the site! You've made me feel welcome :-)