Famished

Romantic energy

Silk crisp sheets robed across the bed as I lie my gaze softened upon your glory, long poise stature cultivates my mind, I slowly run my fingers from the nape of his neck to the bottom of his spine. Tantalising energy ignites in flames, roaring hearts entwine famished from the fight

Author's Note

appreciating the one you love

Reviews

[i am LiLy]

I have to say well done as you write so well....but I don't get life from your view point so I find it hard to find meaning and feeling in your words....

I wake open wounds stuck to a stained mattress...darkened from the blood of my cuts day after day.....my world is dark and very unhappy.....I don't feel love and I don't give love.....

so I'm not the right person to comment on poems of hope and future emotion.

I do like what you have done and I like your talent.....thank you for asking me to be honest.

it means a lot you asked me.

[Yahallo]

This is really beautifully described.

[R.E. Ray]

Eloquent and powerful imagery. Great job setting a mood and conveying passion in a few words. Nice work!

[Priyanshi]

The lines are providing the images,to imagine....and superbly written
:)