Something about smiles

Your crisp damson lips
Rest elegantly upon your face
Like a feature wall
Framed upon your grace
Stunning white pearls enrich your glow
A beautiful smile in tow.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Truly one of the most uncommon, fresh descriptions of a smile that I've ever read. To me, high originality is the mark of a fine poet! Vivid details! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[CD Campbell]

Good work. I like the rhymes. You needs the r on it in line 2. I do that all the time. No biggie. Nice description, look forward to reading more. CD

[Coyote Poetry]

Perfect use of description. Your words kind, wonderful and worthy. Thank you Simba for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote