Suicide

Struggle of life

I won't lie to you
I don't want to live this day
It's like I'm on a carrolsal
Spinning round and round
No getting off this ride
This daily battle
Daily strife

I'm trying to claw back every inch of my life

Slowly dying
No room for growing
The pressures mounting
Volcanoes erupting
Endlessly trying

Desperately hopeing

Author's Note

My day in a nut shell

Reviews

[Ms claws]

My return review:
(Suicide is the unforgivable sin because you can't repent.)
All in all, the poem is powerful.
Raw emotions, especially the second stanza, soak the page like spilled blood.
So, good work!

[.]

I am desperately sorry that you are going through this, I can't just leave here and act like this is just a poem. I hope you are doing well now, better days are waiting for you, I promise.

[Simone Davis]

Thankyou this was a few years back now. I'm doing better.