Broken Promise

 

Years Of Secrets. Seem To Mean Nothing.

You Push Me Away. Like I'm A Horrid Person.

You Used To Accept. That I Was Troubled.

You Used To Love. The Stupid Things I Did.

You've Driven Me Insane. I Can Barely Breath.

I Can't See The Light. I Can't Feel The Warmth.

They All Think I Simple Snapped. Simple....And....Clean.

They Have No Idea. You Tortured Me.

I Clung To You. You Let My Hand Slip.

I Reach Out. Trying To Touch Happiness.

You Kick Me Back Down. Like I'm An Animal.

So What If I Am? You Used To Love It.

I Can't Understand. What Happened?

You Drifted From Me. Was I That Bad?

I Promised To Try. You Never Even Tried.

 

There Are No Kept Promisses.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Serend1p1ty]

I can relate to this one, except unfortunately for me, I was on the other end.
It was me breaking the promises..sometimes you don't even see you're doing it.
But your poem was really good.
Emotionally you can feel it really well.
I like how the sentences are all short, how they're cut off with a full stop.
It works to create the angry, hurt tone in the poem.

Yours truly,
cloud6

[The DuchessPoet]

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