The meaning

The meaning ofr the sun,

Is to give light to see,

The meaning to the light,

Is to help you know the diffrence from,

Day and night,

The meaning to a hug,

Is to show the warmth of your heat,

The meaning to a friend,

Is someone who will be there ''till  the end,

The meaning to a kiss,

Is a new begining,

The meaning of love,

Is an overpowering feeling that you get,

When you're sure he/she is the one.

Author's Note

I don't know why I wrote this. I was sitting in class and wrote it.

Reviews

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

i loved never thought of it that way, now i have some thing to think about. Great poem madam.

[Wicahpi]

all good measures

[AJChallenger]

To be honest I don't like it. These other fools don't know what they're talking about. The theme here is "the meaning of things." But a hug, a kiss and love are all related. The sun is not.

It's also without flow. Rhyme your words all you want, but when doing this you must realize you can't do free-verse sometiems and rhyming others. One or the other. Stick to a syntax, keep a rhyme scheme. Etc. And this he/she thing is bull. Don't put that in there.

[Thomas Fleet]

Great poem. As stated before me, it's pretty cool/interesting on how everything is connected to one another.
It's a pretty original poem and I like it. :)
Thanks for sharing.

[Dark Angel]

I like how things are connected by a string of meaning. It's almost like you say everything is connect through that one meaning. I think, if you wanted to of course and if you entered that state of mind again, you could add to it and make it longer. Also, I think you mean "heart" instead of "heat" and your "till needs to be 'til because it's cut for "until." Another thing that would make the poem flow better would be to eliminate "/" in between "he/she." It makes it seem choppy. Other than all that hun, lovely poem.

[Joy Lynn B.]

thanks

[Vito XYZ]

I see....well it's good, someone else who cares can point out the typo but I like the meaning you've given to a hug, a kiss and even love. I like it