Canvas of life

flow of life.. In a leaf's view

I am a leaf of life

drifting in a trance 

between the marooning glooms 

and blossoms of future blooms.

As the the winds blow

through the tresses of nature;

create a soulful warbles,

lulling my mind away

from its pains and woes.

In mesmerizing biorhythm, it stays

painted in perfect hues

between yellows and blues.

Author's Note

Also a colour challenge and challenge about a leaf... critic and review away :)

Reviews

[realmwriter]

I really enjoyed this. The narrator being the leaf is a great take on it. Nicely done.

[Sindu]

Thanks realm! Happy that you enjoyed..

[realmwriter]

You're very welcome. It was my pleasure.

[MomzillaNC]

Cool poem! I like narrator becoming the leaf!

[Sindu]

Thanks Momzi!

[Sindu]

I put up another one too

[MomzillaNC]

Cool, send me and RR. I'll read it too. Interesting that this one seemed to fit the challenge…

[Sindu]

I know! I was surprised when I read the challenge but seemed apprehensive. Also everyone tries to put up a new one for a challenge so I tried too

[SmittyJas]

Yellows and Blues are very psychedelic Painted yellows and Blues giving off psychedelic hues. I say to you Child of the Sixty's Gone away. very nice poetry my Friend.

[Sindu]

Well Smithy Jas, that's definitely a real warm review my friend. Thanks a lot! Really glad to know you liked it. Indeed a psychedelic hue ;) thanks again for taking time for checking this :)

[R Smith]

well the poem is just beautiful and with all those things of nature floating around i'd say its green

[Sindu]

Full score to you :P thanks Richard! Nature puts a skip in everyone's step, doesn't it! :D

[Surya pradha]

nice verses, i love green too.

[Sindu]

That's great! Thanks!

[Jordan]

My favorite color also, green!

I really enjoyed this, I'm a sucker for a nature poem. This was fun to read but your diction still makes this elegant. Great write!

[Sindu]

Wow! Great choice then :P
Thanks a lot Jordan! Glad you enjoyed it.

[Swetha]

green, right? 'a leaf of life'...nicely phrased.

[Sindu]

Yup, that's right! Thank you!

[ManasaC]

"I am a leaf of life
drifting in a trance
between the marooning glooms
and blossoms of future blooms" The concept of life in four amazing lines....... Well done!!!!

[Sindu]

Thank you so much manasa for a great review :)

[Shapirta]

green??? but very nice poem

[Sindu]

yesss!! ;) Thanks Amy.. but why 'but'?

[Shapirta]

dunno! =) ignore it