The Rising..

A tomb of flowers

Cacophony of lovers

Named peace and sane

Their forms slowly wane

As the darkness clouds

Unleashing the hounds.. 

Author's Note

Ignore the third line and it takes a whole new meaning! A cousin asked me, 'Is this a satire of sort?'
I wanted the third line to be a shout out after I had put down the first two, which created a very different picture than intended. Other than the usual form of rise of evil against good, I would love to know what other interpretations you can think of!

Reviews

[Saddam]

The good and bad are two faces of our life. We must understand. But we often regrets with God.
Value Yourself.
Good massage in it dear. Beautiful write.

[Sindu]

Thank you SSADD! Yes, it's important to value ourselves n differentiate the rights through wrongs..

[Surya pradha]

beautiful poetry here. loved it.

[Sindu]

Thank you :)