Daily poem: A puddle of memories

A late night explosion of shut down feelings from long ago.

If teardrops were rain, 

my world would be flooded

with the unspoken words,

of my unending love

for you. 

Reviews

[Rafia ~ Yellow Girl]

Interesting piece of writing, a classical concept nicely done! :)

[SineadJulia]

Thank you guys for taking the time to read and review this!

[annabellee]

simple and short but yet you say it all with these few words. touching and well written.
Loved it :)

[Madison.]

I love the simplicity of this, and the truth that comes with it.

[Inspiring Writer]

I won't say that this write is a Memorable write, i'd say, this's a great and a real write that lives in every one's heart forever... great job, i liked this simplicity of words. It's a real poem and you made it when you were thinking about someone from your heart and you missed someone much... and your these such a nice thought surely came from your heart in the memory of love ... isn't it !
liked this piece, it's totally a heartfelt piece that can touch everyone's heart. And one more thing i'd like to say that you here well compare tears with The Rain (drops).
Great job, just keep writing!

[SineadJulia]

Thank you! It was just done a few minutes before bed, nothing spectacular..just a release of emotion. Nevertheless thank you for your kind words

[mark]

great words.
you fit it in nicely with such small writing.
well done :)

[SineadJulia]

Thank you so much!

[mark]

you're welcome :)