Dear Father

My wings failed me long ago

and ever since i’ve spiraled downwards

i tried to move with your flow

but it was your words i could not hear

you cast me out

just for loving you

it’s them i doubt

it’s them that’s untrue

cast me down

break me

but as i drown

i’ll disagree

with your decision

your choice

your vision

and your voice

Reviews

[Kamari's]

The word to describe this is heartbreaking a father abandoning his son when the son only wanted love the father in my perspective will later on regret letting his son fall amazing structure and writing skills

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

Thank you, i'm glad you liked it! :)

[Kamari's]

You are welcome I can't wait to read what else you have

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

A lot of people don't realize this poem/lyric was written through the perspective of Lucifer.

[Kamari's]

I can see that yet it made more sense as a child trying to love his father when lucifer tried to take over maybe add more of a battle for power and being sent to a fire hell

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Yes, I have to agree with Sami... this is a great poem. The last five lines really made me feel the indignation of the piece. Well done.

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

Thank you :) I appreciate it.

[Sami Khalil]

I like this write ALOT...THANK YOU FOR POSTING...:)

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

Haha Anytime :) Thanks!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)