Chosen

I have been chosen to place a foundation upon this world.

Showing my faith,

Indeed spilling out my soul.

Its blood decorates the stone.

Giving you a visual of me: the unknown.

To be known and to allow you to have the knowing that you are not alone.

I’m blessed to have eyes and ears.

To see and hear beauty, but will you take the time to notice?

Accept and embrace everything!

Throw the hate and grudges away please!

Although we cannot see grace, we are all standing in it.

Eulogia: good words giving a connection to speak with you revealing the truth and nothing but it.

I’m like anything you have ever, or will come across.

I’m not perfect.

Every day I carry my cross on my back.

I’m dragging my sins to salvation, so they’ll be forgiven.

There’s freedom to do stupid things, freedom to make mistakes because I am human.

I’m not a wind up being.

I have my own mind and I make my own choices, so for that I am thankful.

Am I existing for myself, or existing for you?

I’ll love and cater to you all because I love to see your smile and no matter the struggle, it’ll all be worth my while!

I’m taking off enough time, so I can give you all of mine.

I will never hold back, so please allow this to come to life.

Of all eons of time I’m just a small fraction.

Just to have an impact on one soul will be my satisfaction.

The foundation for me can be the foundation for you because we are all chosen!

If you understand this, let it be told.

Take it back, life, love it!

Reviews

[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

"There’s freedom to do stupid things, freedom to make mistakes because I am human," as a virgo woman this concept is always a struggle to grasp. Cause being a perfectionist is one of my major character flaws, so that line was especially special to me.

The message was clear and precise and relatable! I enjoyed it!

[sinNsincerity]

I know plenty of Virgos and I get along with them quite well< but I'm a cancer, so I pretty much get along with everyone.
I wouldn't call it a flaw. You just like to get things done that's all.
And if I were to call them flaws, we can't change them. They will always be there, all we can do i make adjustments and correct them.
I'm so glad that you could relate and that a connection was made Tionge. That means the world to me!

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Loved this amazing poem. The imagery was phenomenal. Beautiful writing as always :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you thinking so Lauren, I'm glad you loved it!

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Your welcome :)

[aLittlePain]

A simple truth that we can all meditate on! When one realises that 'you' were chosen all along that becomes a reality that can change attitudes, and cultivate inner peace and a servants heart. Always understanding that life is for giving, that's when you know your living!

Wise words bro! R x

[sinNsincerity]

We all have a purpose, and there's a purpose behind that; rather we understand or accept it.
Love the way your mind works Rachel.

[ranscan]

The piece has a message, it is strongly represented in the imagery and terminology.
As a work I believe the whole suffers for the part, that is the beauty of flow and communication is diminished by the ever present light of the theme.
There are a couple of places though where your talent with weaving words does surface.

[sinNsincerity]

This was one of my first writes, just thought the new readers should know what I'm really about.

[Nina H.]

Such a beautiful poem! Very well written. One of your best pieces. Very deep.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Nina, I'm glad you think so.

[Fahmida Mehreen]

"I’m not perfect.
Every day I carry my cross on my back.
I’m dragging my sins to salvation, so they’ll be forgiven."

This is true for every one of us, alive.
Nicely written. :)

[sinNsincerity]

Amazing, one of the truest and most real lines I have ever written...
Thank you Fahmida, yours truly- David.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I feel your faithful conviction, how you stand by it firmly. But it does not feel preaching-like, but very gentle and wise and down-to-earth.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you can see that in me because that's how I try to live my life...
Thank you Nadia.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

That is wonderful! Keep at it!

[sinNsincerity]

Till I'm dead, or till it dies in me...

[nazia]

This is so beautiful. a profound message hidden in your words. Loved the way you crafted the entire work around the thing we all should take heed of. Life is too short to hold grudges. start living it freely and accept everything with open arms even sour lemons.

[sinNsincerity]

Yes exactly! Life is too short and we should do our best to be happy as well as others.

[steven sundell]

Well done, way to truly lay yourself out there. Also,you offered all, a much needed dose of perspective. Perspective.....use it, or lose it!
Very nice
Sonny Sundell .

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[Confuser]

How gorgeous! We are all so blessed with so much and one is free will. Realizing that is a step toward living a joyful life: We must forgive for ourselves; not to forget but the learn, contribute to humanity and be a compassionate person. That's why we are on this small planet with an endless universe. Pass the love forward. Just beautiful - I love it.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I'm glad that you loved it!
Thank you for reading!

[Confuser]

My pleasure!

[E G TEN]

Well spoken words, always a pleasure and a learning experience
Every time I intrude in your world, never a dull moments, cool stuff!
Keep em coming"

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Sir!