Nice Guys Finnish Last

They say nice guys finish last...

Well at last, I'll be the one you'll finally remember

And you're dreaming that I'll come fast.

I have you thinking that next season will be the reason for believing,

But by the time I arrive, I'll be part of your past.

Letting time pass and I hate to leave your heart in a cast,

Let alone a scare,

But know my signature will remain in your soul vast even when I'm at far.

Behind the line?

I?

Can never place you in the back of my mind.

My eyes are your memory.

It's always there to greet me like the early morning sunshine.

Now you can understand why I was so blind when you just said hi.

Reviews

[Midsummer's Pint]

As one to remembered...

As to be one to finish before other's have gotten known as..

Quickly disguising something which deep_-er than other realize it being..

Reason within the season to liked to be in the next to have it coming to but...

Come but gone... Dezerted, vast feeling coming at Ya... not to realize whence by You.....

Gone too close? coming too far to be there to affect so...


Far'ther on.. at the front... getting hit.. being shot at...

Seeing what is there to be seen... Through to it to handled be...

Rising, giving warmth... Being shocked... blind to the contact one stare of the eyes...

Flústered one being to see own feeling to be manifested....

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[MissLaine]

:) reminds me of a cute love song. I really loved this piece. Wonderful write!

[sinNsincerity]

That's awesome, which song may that be Miss Laine?

[MissLaine]

I didn't have a song in mind per say but like one of those love songs :)
I enjoyed reading this!

[sinNsincerity]

I really appreciate that Laine!

[SheIsMe]

I love the flow of all of your writing. It's heart pounding and lyrical. This is a really good poem.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so hon!

[Insight "MH"]

Your writings are filled with lovely emotions and I really enjoy each one of them. This write shows how creative and romantic you are, well done.

Insight.

[sinNsincerity]

I really appreciate that.

[Southern_Writes]

Just a few grammatical/spelling errors. But really enjoyed a glimpse into your thought, it was lovely.

[sinNsincerity]

It's my pleasure.

[RomaJ]

The last three lines felt like a warm sweet kiss, lingering in her memory and when she opened her eyes, all she sees is you. Lovely write Sin.

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks a bunches Roma!

[Daydreaming]

I read it a few times, creative and lovely. Good job :3

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for doing and thinking so.

[Cara]

this is really cool, amazing poem thank you for sharing

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Cara.

[Mila]

I don't agree with the phrase "nice guys finish last", I think it's immature and self-pitying, but I can't take away from your work, which is very well written and well structured. That's just my opinion, but great job with your poem!

[sinNsincerity]

Haha there's no maturity with out maturity and even so... you need a balance. It's all yin yang. Life is full of contradiction and paradoxes and I find it wonderfully beautiful.
Thank you for spending the time to read Mila and sharing your opinion with me. It matters and I respect it.

[Rana]

Cute how those lines speak of more than a piece of you being left with them and vice versa. "My eyes are your memory"- that's a beautiful way to describe it. Sweet, lovely work.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Rana. It's always a pleasure!

[Frozen Eyes]

The Last line is the loveliest like it appropriately sums up the whole poem.. Loved it :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so hon!