Mad Man

Mad Man

I don’t write this to present myself as mad.

I am a mad man,

But do note that I am only a man.

Sometimes I just need to write my thoughts

From my mind using a

Pen and note pad.

There are so many starts,

Where do I begin?

Second that,

Where do I end?

People dislike me when I’m outspoken

And honestly, that’s okay.

Some people who meet me

Probably won’t want to ever speak to me again,

And that’s okay because I’m not here for them.

Then again..,

Of course we can always be friends,

Then again..,..,

Of course we can be more than friends

Because you’re special!

But I don’t know if

I can be the one to depend

On,

(My heart could be more than wrong...)

If you let me in…

I can be your him,

I can be your sin,

I can be your end...

I am self-conscious at most times,

Well who isn’t?

Too much time passed

When I wrote that.

Maybe sometimes I just think way too much.

I just wanted to be more than your lush.

F**k a secret crush!

You crushed me hard

When you told me

That my misery

Made you blush.

What the f**k!?

Forgive me if I allowed

Us to move too fast.

I didn’t mean for this to rush...

Reviews

[Midsummer's Pint]

To have done it this year twice... with same gal... how resonating and aarrgghh..

"Lessons? oh i will due them in time" spent during painfully doing so...

I'd hate to say to you "sorry am but same spirited.. newa learn..."

So.. after all this existant being... Glad to fumble to the bumple...

Hope you've been well!!! [i was to put 98 but seven was speaking "You like to sevenize this nein-er..."

So there have it hug it if u feel like...:D I-T

[sinNsincerity]

Story of my life

[Midsummer's Pint]

Now have to say.. not at all GLAD TO RESONATE..:/ i HAVE TO THO BUT IT IN..

If life hard punches kick back and feel the urge of sharing.. another poem..
Glad i am i've not been forgotten...

[Veronica L. Wadsworth]

I felt like you were in my head at some points of the poem. Its nice to find others who can get whats in my head out on paper. I liked the poem I think it was something that people can understand even if they aren't mad.

[sinNsincerity]

Hah, did it really make you feel like that?
That's amazing to hear!
Thank you for reading Veronica!

[Veronica L. Wadsworth]

It really did there are situations in my life in which some of the things you wrote go through my mind. It was nice to see someone else express some of the same feelings. It makes you not feel alone.

[sinNsincerity]

That is so beautiful!
You are not alone and never are.
This is why I write, to make a connection, so that others who feel like me are not alone.
This made my day! =D

[Veronica L. Wadsworth]

Awe thank you for your kind words. I am happy to have made your day. To me what makes a writer great is my ability to feel a connection with them in someway. I love to read things that make me feel as if I am actually having a conversation with them. Your poem was just that a conversation with me.

[613]

I connected so much to this poem. Very nice job.

- Brittney

[nazia]

We all are mad in one way or the another. It is this madness that drives us and takes us to the destination. Loved the concept of yours and the use of the word. And off course a man of many means and many ways to convey what he feels like. Nice write David :)

[sinNsincerity]

Yes, we all are mad in our own ways, which I love!

[Ishita Dixit]

I guess we're all like this adorable mad man of yours!
We all tend to think hard at times, find answers.
No matter how good we are, there will always be people
who will hate us.
We can't please everyone and we should not give a f**k!
Great job, hon! :)

[sinNsincerity]

I would like to say so to some certain degree hahaha =D
Thank you Ishita, you are amazing!

[Passengerr]

wonderful, wonderful piece sin. love the honesty and originality. keep it up man. you are unique writer.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you man!

[Jamestown]

Oops Sin did it again, he he:)
Great job brother, do you and let the haters waste energy while you do
big things, the world will hate you because they hated Christ first:(
Keep keeping on and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you man for always reading.

[B]

I love it

So original and daring

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome piece my friend! My advice is do you and do it big! Some will accept that some wont. But you could try your best to make everyone happy and it wouldn't be any different so be happy doing you big dawg! Good piece!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm always me and that's the honest me.
Thank you for reading Aaron.