Vacancy

Everyday that follows

Gives birth to less hope.

Every morning I try on

A new soul

Because the one I dressed myself

Yesterday,

Or the moon before

Has grown old

And oh so tired

With my groans

As well as moans…

There are no need for clothes

Because my heart is

Bare,

Naked,

OPEN!

But every night the sign reads as closed

And there’s really no

Reason why my heart is this vacant...

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

Totally awesome metaphor of clothes and soul! So true how we get those days where it's just tough sometimes ... Your heart is never vacant just sometimes on its one personal vacation until it's ready for business again!! :) love it SWEETSIN. (All caps see ... Totally loved it lol)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Bestie! =D

[JayceeC]

I love the clothes metaphor, and the soul being bare..Great feeling of despair carried throughout the write! Jan

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Jan!

[B]

An original piece of how you feel

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!

[Mirab Irfan]

Beautifully written,my friend!
Very interesting choice of words,'like always'!
Great! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Mirab!

[AaronFreitas]

"Every morning I try on
A new soul
Because the one I dressed myself
Yesterday,
Or the moon before
Has grown old "

I love those lines buddy.... nice work!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading bro!

[TheOne&Only]

Sad...but beautiful..another loved piece...

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so.

[Caladoscope]

Deep, Dark and terribly Beautiful....

[sinNsincerity]

Mmm yes, thank you so much!

[Sarah Hampton]

Your vulnerability here is admirable and very well written.

[sinNsincerity]

Hmmm... can you tell me why you think so?

[Sarah Hampton]

Each line feels as though it represents the peeling off of another layer so that it almost feels as if I'm reading it backwards but that's what I like about it. I find the last two lines especially brave.

[sinNsincerity]

Very interesting! I like that!
Thank you for reading Sarah =D

[Jamestown]

Well written and delivered, I like the honesty behind the words!
My friend you don't need to swap souls, yours is great, just put
your armor of God on every morning and march, PTL!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading man!