M3

My body has scars,

But my skin is soft.

I take care of mine

Without my mind

Because it’s lost.

I follow my soul,

Have a heart of an angel,

No hate for the devil…

Only hope!

I’m so sure of what not to do,

But not so sure of what to…

No false promises.

Just forgiveness.

People surrounding me are expecting greatness,

But honestly they don’t understand me,

So I supply them with a brutal silence.

So use to running away,

But so sick and tired of being this way…

Reviews

[Devious13]

I love this to pieces you had me from the start not one thing that you mentioned I have not or still feel and it was comfortimg right now I needed that real nbad more hen you know thatnks again from the depths of my soiul great
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[sinNsincerity]

That means so much to me and I want you to know that I really mean that.
I'm really grateful that this piece spoke out to you and was able to give you some comfort. This was really an open cry to me and this is as real as it gets with me. This is one of my favorites and I'm really glad that you read it hon.

[Rana]

Quite profound, this poems expresses a couple of something that's rarely seen in words yet floats in the mind often. It felt real. A nice variety of thoughts indeed.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad it felt real to you because it's real to me.
Thank you so much for reading Rana.

[sereenaoutloud]

This is deep SweetSin...you can feel the frustration ...not sure what to do , being pulled in all directions and how easy it would be to just runaway from it all! But to make change happen you have to stay and fight my friend!!
Brilliant, powerful write!

[sinNsincerity]

yea that would be the easy way, but there's no fun in that.
Change is good and making corrections, so that change may come.
Thank you Sereena!
I always love what you have to say.

[sereenaoutloud]

I know bestie... it is always easier said then done!

[Ishita Dixit]

So sure of what not to do but not so sure of what to...
This is me. 100%. I am always confused and indecisive is my middle name!
I loved this poem David!
It was deep, meaningful and very relatable.

P. S. How many poems do you write per day? :P
you don't have to answer of course.

[sinNsincerity]

It's getting ripped into two huh
I write from one to three on paper, but if you could hear the ones I write in my head.
Those are the ones that slip away so quick and leave me no time to write down.
There are times where I don't write for months though also
I just wrote one right now.

[Ishita Dixit]

Its good in a way.
You must never let the talent rust! =D

[B]

Silence speaks truth

So i love this poem

Speaking of forgiveness, patience and facing hatred with love

Beautiful poem and a beautiful heart that wrote it

[sinNsincerity]

as well as curiosity.
Thank you for reading, I highly appreciate it!

[Sydney]

So relatable. Great work friend

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you could relate Sydney.
Thank you!

[Jamestown]

Another fantastic piece my brother!
Emotions are deep in this one, and wording is again fantastic,
No false promises, just forgiveness:) Love it!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed:)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you James.
I always look forward to what you think.
Always blessed!

[TheOne&Only]

Very emotional. I can definitely relate...

"So use to running away,
But so sick and tired of being this way..."

Yes! You're damn right!! :-/ Thanks for sharing.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm so glad you could relate hon.
And thank you for reading, I truly appreciate it!