Eros

My curse…

I’m so willing to

disperse 

an erection

of memories, hopes,

and feelings.

I won’t ever imply to hurt,

or would I disrespect yours.

I only want to penetrate

and impregnate your

hearts and watch our love grow!

Reviews

[Alice Poésy]

I love the use of sexual words in a sense of innocence. Popular society loves to paint sex as something vulgar, removing the true sense of affection and/or love from its act. This is very "anti-pop", and clever, needless to say, and I, of course, possessing these qualities, love it.

Great work.

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so, I love to take the views of normalcy and mend them with my heart, soul, and mind. Separating the passion from compassion, which people highly confuse one from thee other.
I'm very well pleased that you can relate and that you enjoyed it.

[JessyJacob]

Nice writing.

[Susana Puente]

U pregnated my mind with emotion...and penetrated mY soul...lovely yet exciting.crear job!

[sinNsincerity]

All that's left is for you to fall in love with me...
I'm just joking.
On a serious note, I'm very well pleased you had enjoyed it Susana!

[Susana Puente]

I did enjoy it !!!while i read it my head blew up in a baloon kinda way till at last poped out of emotion!

[sinNsincerity]

Hey, that's all I can ask and why I continue to write.

[jeannemarie coulter]

the arrow hit home...i am filled with your words and the mind seeks to be sated...thank you and well done...

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, that's amazing!

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

We often blame Cupid for our miseries in the affairs of the heart. But he is only trying to help us out ;). I like the sexual words used here without the sexual innuendo. It is purely emotional and spiritual.

[sinNsincerity]

I wanted use those sexual words in such a way that it wasn't.
Thank you for reading Nadia!

[Nadia B.]

Your title really sets the poem, its very foundation and yet defines Cupid in a way I have not seen before. That there is no maliciousness creeping up on the un-wanting but rather a yearning to share and watch how sharing overflows. I find it it interesting that you liken this to a curse, however, That the willingness is uncontrollable and goes beyond desire. Which I suppose in a way shows the sincerity and innocence of it all, thank you for sharing this arrow filled lovely heartfelt poem Mr. Cupid!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you So much Nadia, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it!

[Devious13]

very cute , original , corky but you know i am more of the intimate deeper side of things

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you hon!

[alf]

love this so very much!!! Your muse is taking you on a humorous bent, a light-hearted journey, and you pen these little tongue in cheek pieces as well as every other mood!!! Love this Sin!!! alf

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so Alf!

[alf]

You are one of the handful of poets who have never let me down!! My expectations of good words and poetic form are high, and so many fall by the wayside. Keep writing, my friend, for I think you have far to go!!!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm doing my best to go far with writing. It's the last thing I have been blessed with and I can't let it go. It'll be the death of me.

[alf]

sad smile directed to you, but I know what you say!!!

[Niana Devine]

Quite an interesting poem.
Reading it through the first, I was confused and my immediate reaction was: WHAT?! But reading through it a second time, I laughed. It's actually quite humourous and a fascinating characterisation on Cupid.

[sinNsincerity]

hehe thank you, I wanted it to be funny and make others smile over this one.
Thank you for reading Niana!

[Niana Devine]

Well, I think you have succeeded with your goal.
You're welcome, anytime.

[Elisa]

Woah it got so real though! I thought this was going to be sweet and innocent, but boy was I shocked! This is an interesting take on the characteriztion of cupid, to say the least.

[sinNsincerity]

Yes! hehe I love to hear that.
I wanted it to be a bit funny. It makes me laugh when I read it. =D