My Heart's Coldest Winter

On these long winter days and nights...

I spend them here at home alone.

You are the life of giving me the strength to get up

out of bed to come and see you.

It’s just so cold,

I don’t want to be alone.

The suffering of this awful December

storm has broken me down as the snow,

Falling from my eyes.

I know that you are the one

to supply me with hugs and

vanish all of my fears.

Replacing them with jeers and cheers.

Just to hold you in my arms would

recover all of those broken years.

It’s now the ending of January

that proceeds to February.

Just another month closer to the

warmth of summer time…

I am feeling and knowing that

maybe one day I can say that you

are all mine as my beloved.

Coming up are the chocolates,

kisses, and the frequent wishes,

not to mention, the hopes that you’ll

be my valentine...

Author's Note

wrote this February 10, 2007
found this and revised it a tad bit...

Reviews

[guy drori]

Very nice. Your enjabments are very good, and the fact that this has no stanzas allowes the poem to have a much better flow. At first I thought the girl had left the man, but apparently from what I understood they were never together. It is obvious that he wants her, yet I can tell that inspite of the fact that he so desperately desires her, he is somewhat afraid of her rejection.

[sinNsincerity]

It was someone I was observing from across the room. Someone I used to date for three years, and after some time away from each other, I wrote this as I was contemplating reuniting with her...

[guy drori]

Guess that was some good inspiration you got there

[sinNsincerity]

I see things everywhere that inspire me. it just comes down to if I have the desire to write about it...

[guy drori]

That's great...inspiration has a greater significance when you do something with it :) Keep on the great work

[B]

Love your link between months and your lover
I tend to do the same in my head
Thinking everything changes but my baby stays the same
Along the months and across the years

He is my source of all stability and comfort

Its so beautiful this write
In a way you are reinforcing her place in your life by depicting a world revolving and she remains your everything

Gorgeous

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Nisreenaa!

[Pratik Mishra]

This is very beautiful, first of all. Second, you have written it in a such a manner that you keep the reader interested. :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Patrik, I really appreciate it!