Wonder Lust

You left me breathless

when you asked,

“Do you like my

necklace?,” as

you escalated your

fingers down from

your left collar

bone towards your cleavage.

The center piece...

Heart exceeding because

a dose of you is

extremely needed!

Please my dear, I’m

in dire need

of O D-ing!

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

Lovely write! Can sense the passion between the lines...

However, I'm not sure whether "escalate" is the right word for what the fingers did......yes, maybe the situation escalated.......and that is quite a pivotal verb in the poem.....so I cannot suggest an alternative, but that's what I got in my first reading.....

Towards the end of the poem, it got a "rap" vibe, where my feet started to tap, but then it stopped.....as if there was more to come....

Great work!

[sinNsincerity]

Escalate as in an escalator. They go up as well as down. Hence her fingers moving downward.
That pretty sweet that you got that vibe. I just used rhythm and pace.
But I stopped it short.
That's part of the seduction.
Always leave them wanting more.

[ANTO]

I wonder if its not a bad idea to O.D. on anything - even our lover then I go nah! I couldnt think of a better person to overdo it with.
Good one Sin. I like the play on words here.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Anto!

[Saddam]

Genuine and desirable write.
All things should not fix on girls.
Enjoy it.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[KWP]

sounds like the testosterone just kicked in ... ahh now bring those eyes back to eye level handsome ;) X

[sinNsincerity]

I'll try to hehe =D Thanks for reading hon.

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Yep those girls can most definitely have the ding effect on us:)
Imagery is very clear in this piece, I enjoyed it a ton!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

And I rather enjoy it hahaha
Thanks for reading man!

[wordman]

women are that way,i have no idea

[sinNsincerity]

Hehe, Thank you for reading Sir!