Morning Delight

I woke up with

your foot by the

side of my left ear

like a telephone.

Caressing my nose

and fiddling with

your right ankle bracelet

like a kitten toying

with a ball of yarn

as the gamma rays

splashed on our bodies.

Receding the dreams

as my heart gained three

centuries and my soul

consumed six in a

single evening.

It’s a shame to not

know this feeling...

Reviews

[Lilly Lyle]

good imagery!! Its a great thing when you can paint a picture like that

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Lilly! I highly appreciate it!

[Rana]

So many pictures and so much life embedded in the words. Utterly original and smile-inducing. It's flipping great.

[sinNsincerity]

hehe =D Thank you Rana, you induced a smile on me =D

[dan]

"Waiter, there's a foot in my ear!" I think that the ankle bracelet ties this whole piece together, like a bow on a Christmas gift. Very nicely done, SiS. take care...dan

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Dan!

[erinwrites]

I really liked the imagery and the feeling, well written!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Erin!

[Frozen Eyes]

It would really be a shame not knowing the feeling. From the beginning till end U made romance flow like honey all over the mind. Superb work. Loved it. *smiles*

[sinNsincerity]

It's the best!
Mmm...honey...
Thank you, I'm glad to hear that you loved it!

[TheOne&Only]

Such a detailed poem, I could see it as clear as a picture..VERY GOOD! ..thanks for sharing.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad to hear you say so.
Thank you hon!

[silent poet]

Very sweet and well written

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Outstanding work. :) I enjoyed reading this one. The rating (as usual) is 100#

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Any time :)

[JayceeC]

The opening stanzas sent my imagination soaring with your gamma rays..lol
I like the detail you give us in this little memory recall you have great imagery going on that makes your reader feel almost voyeuristic.

[sinNsincerity]

This is this flash back I was telling you I had.
Lol it sent me chills when I snapped out of it.
It was quite pleasant though...

[JayceeC]

If your having flashbacks, at least they are pleasant ones. :-)

[KWP]

Ring Ring - wake up it's meeeeee, Big Toe, LIttle Toe three in the middle toe ...

Love this - great imagery -

Love the gamma rays - when gamma rays hit your naked body it is like electricity intensified tenfold

Nice one bud CX

[sinNsincerity]

Hello..? hehe =D
Thank you, you are too funny!