My Eyes II.

My Outer Body Is Fresh Like The Skin Under My Skin, Though My Eyes Are Kurupt, I Have A Heart & Soul Of A Virgin…

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"	David Barajas JR

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. You left the reader with something to think about. I believe innocence is stolen from us. Virgin soul is hard to maintain. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Yea it is and for me, I couldn't maintain it, but had to rediscover and allow it to come back to me at the right moment. I'm not perfect in any point, but I always try to make the right choice...

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to do. But we can.

[Shivai]

I am sorry I don't know who Kurupt is.
However, I love the piece, your writing does inspire me, David (now that I know your name xp).

[sinNsincerity]

No need for sorry's. Pretty much I used the "K," so that it'll be different.
I'm glad you can find some inspiration. That's amazing.
Thank you for reading Shivai.

[Shivai]

Welcome :)

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

Kurupt like the rapper? I am little confused by that, but i really like the piece. Please explain the Kurupt reference though, so i can fully appreciate it. :)

[sinNsincerity]

Wow you caught that! I didn't think any one would. He was always one of my favorite rappers as a kid for how lyrical he is and his broad range of vocabulary. I learned so many big word in his music by looking them up in dictionaries.
but besides that, I opted out of using the K rather than the C to display imperfection.
The C wouldn't be so corrupt as it is with the K and It proves it being that you actually got confused about it.

[Emily]

Nice little story you tell here!
Well done!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Emily

[Maja]

Though my eyes are.. "corrupt"?

Other than that, I liked this short piece. :)

[sinNsincerity]

I used the "K" on purpose.
Thank you!

[jeannemarie coulter]

your words touch the heartsoul of all who read them...well done

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so. It means so much to hear that!

[Mila]

Make sure to put a space between the comma and the world following. Other than that, good job!

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks for that.

[Ruth]

Hit reboot and surf the wave again, is what I say ;) lol

[sinNsincerity]

hehe, Thank you Ruth!

[wordman]

heart and soul of a virgin,lord i have been trampled on so many times i am all wrinkled up

[sinNsincerity]

You just have to press the refresh button every once in awhile...

[wordman]

thanks,i will try that