Eardrum

Hubba hubba.

Hubble eyes...

All I see is star light

When I tap into

my third mind.

Lub- lub!

My love?

Can you hear?

It’s my heart’s love

banging on

your eardrum.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

WOW! What a load of intriguing imagination here! I can't believe this. I love it when someone surprises me with a novel approach to writing love poems (so many love poems are so similar!) Excellent use of onomatopoeia to SHOW instead of tell, based on SOUND, which goes with your theme so perfectly (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you Margie, that's magic. I'm always thinking of new ways to write to stand out from the rest. Love is Love.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the use of the words. A positive flow leading to good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Sir!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Nice poem, well done :) Rudi

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Rudi,

[jeannemarie coulter]

delightful...a perfect touch of humor...

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! thank you.

[Emily]

I really like this one!
You did a great job with this poem!
Keep it up!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Emily.

[E G TEN]

Nice poem Sin, something new and cool, a pleasant write! :-)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Jamestown]

Very cool piece!
witty and fun,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Bro!

[Cara]

wow very nice and amazing, thank you for sharing

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Cara!

[Cara]

anytime :)

[MsJewel]

A charming little gem that has left me with a smile.

:) Julie

[sinNsincerity]

That makes me smile! thank you so much Julie!

[Terry O'Leary]

Unusual write...
interesting concepts...
Nice!!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Terry!

[Divya]

Sweet, precise and nice. Gud work

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Divya.