Make a Wish

I have a fountain of quarters

In my heart from

All the times I've played love.

Each time the screen read

GAME OVER!

Forever hung over

Forever I hunger

Forever I plunder

Into the depths

Of the fountain

To be left alone with

Infinite wonder...

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Reviews

[Tashida]

Man for real you need to copyright these analogies or better yet let me steal some cuz they are seriously sooo creative. I really love your style of writing: the way you say stuff without flat out saying it. It makes for a more colorful piece.
That aside, if this is based off of real experiences, I hope you find a girl soon ;) You deserve it :)

[sinNsincerity]

This website does copyright my poems for me and I have had some of my poems in print by some publishers. And I have actually had some people on here demand that I sell them some of of my poems so they can can claim it as their own, but the never want to pay up.
I'm glad you love my style. I do try my best to make it my own and to stand out from anyone.
And thank you, I pray so as well, but at the moment I'm not looking for a women because I'm so caught up in getting my degree, but if it happens it will happen.

[Tashida]

Yea I get that... And it WILL happen (i got a feeling lol):)

[kyam]

Wow!! This is a great piece.....Lots of feeling put into this....I like it alot......Kyam

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for spending the time to read Kyam, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[Urja Gokani]

great words amazingly written keep it up :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Cherry, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Urja Gokani]

welcome :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautiful, filled with love and emotion.
I love the way this was written out sounds so poetic, and the rhyming is brilliant.
I love the way it flows. Comes together quite nicly.
Well done, keep writing :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welome :)

[Une coccinelle]

Quarters! Brilliant! Keep playing...eventually the game gets easier, you find the right tactics, and you'll get the high score.

[sinNsincerity]

hahaha Thank you!
I will.

[Willard Wells]

Very inventive. I really like the quarters and game over. In love we are often all in very quickly and then just as we are on a roll, "Game Over". Well done young man. Good luck in love.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm more than glad that you did and thank you for your kind wishes.

[Insight "MH"]

I love how you used the imagery of a fountain to describe the ongoing pain. This is a wonderful write.

Insight.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so!

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome.

[DeerInHeadlights]

in taking any chance there is always a fifty percent chance in dying. figuratively or literally. love does this to us. we know every time we go in, there is a 50/50 chance we will come out of it in more pieces than when we went in. but we still take that chance, and still to this day I cannot figure out why we do it.

[sinNsincerity]

For me, I take the chances because all I want in life is to love and be loved.
And when I find the right women, she'll be worth all the misery...

[Archana]

Sin when I read your work.... it makes me read it again..... nice work... you always make me learn different insights ............same with this piece... thanks

[sinNsincerity]

I think that good righting should make people think and read it more than once without being confusing. I do my best to give people my madness with some beauty, so I'm very delighted with your response hon. Thank you so much!

[maria ( rose)]

OOOOOOH,,, I ADORE THIS POEM. !!!!!!! The Best that I've read today. Thanks for sharing & thanks for the friendship I look forward to reading more soon .. :)
maria

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for wanting to be my friend, I cherish it very much!
I also look forward to hearing from you.
Thank you so much for reading Maria!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wishes are many for the most of us. Life is easy for the few of us. I enjoyed the honest thoughts leading to the good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

I'm very glad that you enjoyed it Sir!
Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.