Summers Fall

This is for Inspired By An Image Hope you like

Flowers fall

You walk strong& tall

Yet each step you take

Makes your heart ache

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The sun rises& it hurts your eyes

At this point all you wanna do is cry

Just keep walking straight

Show them that this is real& not fake

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Its just so hard to walk away from the life you once knew

You were hated by a lot& loved by few

You waited for a reason to stay

But your world kept getting duller& gray

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The only thing that added color to your world were the strings of a guitar

It helped heal some wounds& scars

But the music couldn't be played in such a horrific place

You won't lose it, just like you lost your heart in a maze

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As you left no one ever called out your name

They danced& cheered in happiness, what a shame

Keep walking& stay calm

Play those guitar notes, &sing a beautiful song

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Don't look back

And face the facts:

~Your better off without them~

Author's Note

The picture is from the contest I had to write a poem based on one of the pictures& I chose this one

Reviews

[Libby]

Beautiful and strong and the rhyming is excelsior (lol) This could easily be lyrics should someone provide a worthy tune.

[WindSong]

I love the seasons so I adore this beautifully written poem. It has great imagery and delivery!

WindSong

[MS. BABy]

i enjoyed this and i liked the different colors

[Desmund Tiny]

Very well written
"The only thing that added color to your world were the strings of a guitar
It helped heal some wounds& scars" I really like these lines. ^^,

[hmarieee]

i love the way you used the guitar in this poem. it was a very good write. you are very talented hun.

[WritersSoul]

OoOoOoOoOoOoHhhh I love it :) its harsh and yet it has a flow of meaning. I also like the idea of the guitar being the healer :) Gud luck in the contest! :D

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Amazing poem, and love the use of the guitar as well, the diff colours relate so well the pic as well. Good luck for the contest :)