The Girl I Love

The Girl I Love So Much

The girl I love so much

Lives right down the street,

I see her everyday, but I am afraid to tell

My true feelings towards her.

I am frightened that she may reject me

Or say nothing at all. The girl I love so much

Is so precious to me that I get jealous when other men approach her.

I pray to god that one day the girl I love so much will be mine.

Reviews

[Holly-Marie]

This was really well written.
It flowed well and was very heartfelt and relatable. A great write =)

[SetApartGirl]

Don't get too discouraged. If she's your girl, it'll all work out. Other than, it was good piece but the flow is a little awkward. Try and see if you can get it to flow a bit better.

[Not A Writer]

The fear of all young men . . . I can relate of course. Good job in communicating your thoughts clearly. This is what all young men think. If you wouldn't mind, would you read this: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/friendly/533577/