Falling

Falling

I'm falling, falling, falling down into the dark hole,

I'm falling because of my own ignorance,

I'm falling because of my own disobedience,

I'm falling because of my own behavior,

I'm falling into a dark path, 

I used to be scared because of the fall,

But now, I think i really deserve it,

For we must all fall before we can climb back to the top.

I'm falling because of my outlook on the world,

But i'm falling for all the right reasons, not the wrong reasons,

We must all hit a dark pit,

To realize what we can lose, and what we can gain.

Reviews

[GlamGirl]

I love this! I love the repetition at the beginning. Great write!

[TylerG]

Definitely***

[TylerG]

Could not be more true....I really like this one a lot, Definite takes being at the bottom of that hole to show you what is really important and show you who you really are...great read keep it up man!