True Ownership

The truth simplified

What does one truly own?

But the actions that are gone.

Author's Note

A little truth to think on

Reviews

[Coffee Vampier]

Very profound because literately everything can be taken away from us in an instant. When everything is taken away all we have is what we have done or said. NIce way of putting that idea into words. I am reviewing this for a contest I am going over. Unfortunately this is two lines not one so it doesnt qualify. however i believe if you were to rewrite is this could be one line and have potential.

[MFAtkinson]

mhmm... gets me thinking. :)

[Tomi]

This slapped me in the face... true and thought provoking :)

[Sir Joseph]

Then mission accomplished mi amigo:)

[lee von cleef]

Ya Truth is always brightest looking back.

[Ethale Captor]

And I reply with, "If you do not own your actions of past, they will own you."

[Marie]

And those probably own us.

[Sir Joseph]

They definitely will if you let them. I try not to let a moment define me, but let it be a defining moment in how I handle it and continue past it.

[marie]

No one really owns anything and actions are always needed to even be able to make a fragment of such a statement:)

[Sir Joseph]

Thank you :)

[marie]

Thank YOU sweety:)

[Holly Mason]

Actions speak louder
then words...
thank you for sharing

[Sir Joseph]

Thank you for reading :)

[StayAnchored]

Wow, that is a very deep thought!
If "actions speak louder than words" then we need to be shining Gods light through our actions( and words;) ) and take ownership of our past ones whether good or bad.

[Sir Joseph]

You are correct!:) Thank you

[StayAnchored]

You're welcome:)

[Frieda P]

Perhaps, but I'm not sure I agree, only thing I truly own are my thoughts, and sometimes I don't even want ownership of those! Much food for thought here..............

[Sir Joseph]

It is ok if you disagree. The goal of this write was to make the reader think. Whether it be an immediate thought or a later ponder.

[Frieda P]

I really didn't need your permission but thanks anyway ;-P

[Sir Joseph]

Hahaha I didnt know ha, iv noticed some people on here get offended when someone does so i was just gonna air on the safe side and make it known its okie dokie :)

[Frieda P]

Lol some people need a chill pill too.............. ;-)

[Sir Joseph]

Yeah lol i would agree on that haha It is rather childish

[quinfinn]

sir joseph...you are playin' with jersey fire here...i'm talkin' lion brand mondo intelligence and savvy..... and she's my w/c buddy...

[Sir Joseph]

Wait?.. Did I offened her in any way???

[Frieda P]

Not at all, don't listen to him, I hardly ever bite when I've been fed! ;-) No worries really quin is overprotective of his girls here.

[quinfinn]

i am not offended....i love my w/c friends...relax and enjoy the flow

[Sir Joseph]

Yes mam! :) i respect that he watches out for ones he cares about

[Sir Joseph]

I do believe i am confused! Lol :) oh well haha

[Frieda P]

See what you started ;-P

[quinfinn]

it's okay...i'm outta here

[Sir Joseph]

The running of the bulls in Pompalona Spain?? :D