Knight Day

So I was in a group text message with my friends, one of them was talking about the night being young. I came up with this...

There's an old tale about a young knight, who was once knighted on a night like this. And before he grew old enough to knight a young knight like himself. The night grew old first and the young knight who soon became an old knight passed on late in the night. So the next knight that came the next night took the Knights place. And this knights name was Knight Day. And Knight Day was good. More fond of the day than the night because during the night he was scared of the dark and he thought evil Knight Snay would attack him while he lay. So Knight Day (the good knight) stayed awake all night looking For Knight Snay only to find the next day that Knight Snay was waiting for him. So Knight Snay slayed Knight Day. And all the people said "Good Day".

Author's Note

I literally came up with this write off the top of my head, I was typing it in and sending it as a text. So no grammar checks or correct usage of English grammar rules any of that lol

Reviews

[Akshay Rawal]

This is 'night'..I mean this is 'nice'. :)
I read it beyond the felling of 'night', and really, it is creativity to make a word recur most of the times and still prevent the piece from becoming gibberish.
Thanks.

[Veronique]

Hmmm quite the witty feller of the 'night' you are...;)

[SirMangosven]

Haha you must really like my writes, goin through all of em aren't you? ;)

[SirMangosven]

And yes, I usually always perform a little better at night ;)

[Veronique]

lol...maybe so...maybe you might check some of mine out sometime as well country boy?You might find something you like...lol

[~]

mmm, my kind of write. on spur of the moment, where the muse takes us :D

[SirMangosven]

Yes! They're always fun!