LUST

She stood there fully clothed
I saw with my naked eye.

What I wanted so badly
my pupils grew wide.

I just couldn't look away
that body had so much to say.

It spoke to my eyes, in
Oh, such a way.

I could close my eyes,
but she's still in my mind.

Sexual thoughts that play so vividly
and then start to rewind.

I glance away, then back again
It's the simplest of sins.

The pleasure I could get from one look
at her skin.

Reviews

[Veronique]

Dang son I like your style ...;) Ya'll talk the talk without comin' out and talkin' dirty....country feller are you maybe? :)

[SirMangosven]

Really you do? :) haha I mean I actually do live in the south, Tennessee, I'm not a hill billy though, what gave it away?;)

[Veronique]

lol...well I reckon maybe first of all the first two lines.A sweet down home country boy usually would never use the dirty stuff for one and then I cheated and saw the Hendersonville,Tennesee on your author stuff over to the right of the page...;) Nice to meet you country boy! I was born in Louisa,Kentucky myself...just a down home kinda girl I reckon...;)

[SirMangosven]

Awww you cheated!;)Haha well you're the one talking all country right now! I didn't think I was that noticeable but I guess if some people like my down home style then it's okay xD

[Veronique]

Lol...yep but I never said I wasn't 'country' now did I ;)Ain't a thing wrong with athe sweet country style hon'...just shows a great heart is all...:)

[SirMangosven]

Personally I think their nicer more kind and better looking but that's just a personal opinion ;)

[Veronique]

Lol...well now I just might have to agree with you on that...;)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...hmmm, did you notice the color of her eyes?

[SirMangosven]

This wasn't a personal experience, though I guess it could be.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I keep misreading your intent...it must be that photo of the guy in the suit! ; )

[Cindy Marietta]

Really loved reading this, the first two lines are fantastic together!

[SirMangosven]

Thanks so much!