Cherry's Letter to her Grandma

This is one of my first poems where I've created two human characters and have tried to put their sad feelings into words.It's not that emotional, but I tried.Cherry, a little girl is remembering her dead grandmother who she misses real bad although she d

Dearest Grandma,

I wish you never went

I wish we all stayed together

Happily till the end

 

I never saw your face

Or ever heard your voice

Not that I am blaming you

It was God's choice

 

Dearest Grandma,

I wish you knew

How much we all

Cry and miss you

 

I wish you'd pamper me

Just for once

Or rather spend some time

Out, alone in the Sun

 

Dearest Grandma,

I wish you'd see

How deeply we love you

Papa; grandpa and me

 

Dearest Grandma,

I know you can't come back

And forever

You presence...I will lack

 

But wherever you are

Be happy and merry

Coz' we'll always love you Grandma

Yours lovingly,

         - Cherry

 

 

Author's Note

Are there any grammatical mistakes?

Reviews

[Nely Amorim]

a lovely remembrance to your grandmother (?) I didn't notice any grammatical errors but then i don't pay attention to that too much unless it's riddled with spelling mistakes...lol just enjoy you writing.. this poem is very touching :)