I believe

I AM AN OPTIMIST!!!!!Ok, I mean...we all are optimists but our positive thoughts are kinda dominated by the negative ones.This one's for all the readers....

 

I believe that the Sun does shine

I believe that now, it's my time

I believe that I finally see

I'm not one of them; I'm one of 'ME'

 

I believe that people do care

I believe they're always there

I believe that love exists

I can see what lies under the mist

 

I believe there are not-so-good times

I believe that I've committed a few crimes

I believe theere are some incomplete works

I believe that some feelings, I have hurt

 

But...

I believe that it's not the end

I believe that they all will understand

I believe they'd be successful; they'll be free

The sky's thee limit...if I just believe

Reviews

[Phil Sanders]

Nicely written ... cleverly composed ....

[Tenten]

two spelling errors for 'there' and 'the' on the 3rd stanza 3rd line and the last line. other wise its a beautiful piece that makes me smile reminds me a lot of Blind Melon songs or Savage Garden.

[Travis Lawrence]

This would be a wonderful song. Thanks for the comment :-)

[Albert Freeman]

Great poem. I'm an optimist too and always great to see a fellow optimist unabashedly unafraid to step forward and declare it so.:)

[ANUJ]

HEY LOVED YOUR POEM TOO GOOOD 1111