Death

Whoever said that death is bad

I enjoy it; I embrace it

Being ridiculed and insulted

Time after time

The deaths hasn't stopped helping us

Helping us in breaking away from all the chains that we forge in our life-time

 

Who says that death is the killer of all hope

Rather it revives a new hope in me

Hope...of meeting God Itself and all my deead dear ones

It gets rid of all my fears and sorrows

And makes me a brave person

Someone I wish to become

 

Who says that death is sad

With all this freedom that I've gained...

I can't help but smile

 

Death is not my foe

It's my fellow, my friend...

Reviews

[alternative_be]

Very touching! Hopefully this will open some people's minds before treating them badly. Others may gain insight from this poem into the mind of others and become more understanding. Yes, you have to be brave to take your own life, also others can cause you to want to take your own life.
Some very bright minds have taken their own life, that does not mean you necessarily have to follow their example ... yet I'm glad you wrote this poem because I hope some readers will become less judgemental and will not feel provoked when confronted with suicide or euthanasia for that matter.

[Phil Sanders]

Powerful ... unusual writing .. but very thought provoking ....

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Great view on the subject.... a little typos here and there but a great write.... Great job!