Inspiration

Just something optimistic

Every minute I'm a new person

Every event transforms me into a personality which is uniquely mine

My dreams and aspirations channelise my thoughts

So that my efforts won't go fruitless

So that one day I become what I want to become

I do stumble over the rocks of life

I bleed being bruised as I fall over and over again

But giving up is something I never learned

And my dreams, I know, will all be hard-earned

Many eyes carefully watch my each step

and many hands help me get through

But, tough times, they're yet to come

To tackle them, it's my job to do

I don't need all the money the world has to offer

Nor do I need all the luxuries, but rather

To reach my destination

All I need is INNER STRENGTH

and some true INSPIRATION... 

Reviews

[Stacy]

Inner strength is important. nicely done.

[Michael]

You have a wonderful flow and paint well with your word choice. Only on one line did I stumble a bit:

"Many eyes carefully watch my each step"

It would flow a bit better for me with an "every" in it, either "every step" or "each and every step"

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Lovely work. Never learn to give up, and may you always have inner strength.

[Angela]

Great work, Siya...I understand exactly where you are coming from. I don't know how to give up either...thank you for that inspirational poem...definitely life comes with hard knocks.