A Sweet feeling

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Could it be more beautiful?

This feeling which is so new

Slowly flowing though my body

From my head to the toe

 

I can sense the throbbing

Of my restless heart

And these eyes keep on searching

For someone who lives miles apart

 

I never felt like this

Yet, it feels so familiar

And everything good and lovable

Somehow feels so near

 

I never laughed in the silence

Nor ever heard its rhythm

I now smile at everything

Oh! What have I become?

 

The wind blows past me

And my feet leave the ground

I surge through the misty clouds

I dance to each and every sound

 

Whoa! I'm back on earth

Where had I been?

My oh-so-perfect dream-world

Or could it be?...

 

Author's Note

Ohk!! I really can't describe this poem...
I wrote down what all came up in my mind. If this poetic piece doesn't make sense, go easy on me...lol

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

This is a great piece.

May you have been inspired by a daydream or a real love however this is a perfect work!
It transmits the lighthearted feelings of someone in love.
You made me remember the time when my heart was beating like crazy to the sight of the one ...
Don't worry you did a marvelous job here.
You're gifted without a doubt ... you'll see!

[Pinky]

yes it does make sense! awesmoe piece... good job getting it out!

[Dorchadas]

wow... I love this... it's so descriptive I can almost feel the emotions, soft but deep and very sweet... amazing... keep up the good work.

[kurrupted]

Well i'd like to start from your author's note- if i cant describe this poem its because its so cool that i am awestruck,
that you scripted what came up to your mind is only an indiication of how a great writer you are (dont worry, i know and see it here in these lines how an awesome writer you are or will be ).
THIS POETIC PIECE DOESNT MAKE SENSE???? girl are you outta your....this poem is great, well penned, deep and thought provoking. believe me its a feeling all living things who fall in love can relate to. its the feeling more associated with first love phonomena.
keep your head up girl, this is awesome. double thumbs up

[Tomás Ó C..]

It makes sense all right, the dizzy feelings of first love... the flow was well thought out for such a young writer... stick to the format and you'll expand your topics in time. Loved the rhyme... not many can do it.

[Dawn]

wow..
I LOVE your poem!! I don't know if this is how you felt when you wrote this, but when I do, I feel a sense of passion and how you feel about life..
Great work!!!
By the Way, thanks for the review...I really appreciated it.

[Mysteral - Night Prowle..]

A little different from some of your other work, but I love it. Has a nice happy lilting feel to it, nice rhyming touch too. Excellent!