Rainy Evening

Well, it's raining here right now

It's raining...

On my body

On my soul

It feels good

So peaceful

So pure

It's evening

And I see the rainbow in the sky

And some excited birds flying by

It's a feeling

A deep feeling in my heart

It's there from the start

It has stopped raining

But I still feel it on my skin

And on my soul...

Coz' some feelings tend to last longer...

Author's Note

Well...???

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Beautifully written! Excellent job. And so very true...

[Angel Bird]

Very poetic write! A little bit romantic and melancholic ...

Me too I like it when it rains ...

You are starting to become a real poet! Keep it up!

An lovely, and image provoking poem!

[Connor]

Nice expression :) great way to express yourself too :)

[Dawn]

Its amazing! It's a beautiful expression of feelings and I appreciate how you've penned your thoughts down in a poetic way!

[kitty_kelley]

I really like the use of repetition for strength and the theme... It's a good write, keep up the work.

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

I love it!!!
It's so beautiful & u express this feeling,emotion perfectly!!
Good write!!!!!

[Zane Mathias]

Great write- this peice is filled with emotions & it is the very kinda poem that every soul can relate! Great job B.P.

[ToRnBaByB]

I love the feeling of rain on my skin, its great.
Lovely write!! I loved it ^_^

[kurrupted]

lol! lovely piece piece you have here siya. this is what i call free-stlying, the fonds and the flow- simple and cool. the last line no doubt excellently did justice to the poem. well penned, thanks for sharing.

[Pinky]

Its a very good piece! thank you for sharing it with me!