Luck

Oh! This one's not good

Oh! man!!

This life!!

What a crap!

Just wake up and fight!!

Race to the ground

To face my mortal enemy

And I stop

Just in time to realise

That I have o wepaon

That's when I remember

That they're too expensive for me to buy them

So I pick up a stone and smash!

My rival falls down

With blood streaming from his head

One lucky move , eh??

But luck won't take me all the way

where I wanna go

Luck won't make my rival turn around just in time

For me to smash it around

Luck won't be there to save me everytime I fall down

Luck will never be there

Luck was never with me

Author's Note

just wrote it out of maddness. Many errors, many flaws..
Just go easy on this one....

Reviews

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

I actually love this pieve it's not that bad girl u beat urself up too much!!
I can totaly relte to this...
If it wasn't for bad luck I wouldn't have any luch at all!!!
I love this part!
"But luck won't take me all the way
where I wanna go"
This is a very beautiful piece!!
Keep up the good work!!!
*High Fives*

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If the enemy won't turn, swirl left...dip down...swirl right with leg extended....opponent falls; legs having been knocked out from underneath. Then use the rock! te he he

I like the random chaotic sway to this piece. It is indeed catchy..almost like a song put to an anime cartoon.

Nice Creation!

Ash

[John Stussy]

Eh, not so flawless as you might think. It's pretty catchy, I like it. Has the chaotic feel of gambling, the rush of tossing all caution to the wind for lack of anything to lose. If there s only possible gain luck is the best route to take often times. :) Good job on this Siya.