Leaves

This has to be haiku!!

Leaves are changing their colour

Falling down on this messed up earth

Losing existence but creating magnificence

Author's Note

HAIKU!! HAIKU!! HAIKU!!

Reviews

[bailish]

I like this one. It makes you think about it.

This shows you have an eye for seeing what others overlook.

[Staci Brown]

hey girl...

i like your idea here but i'd suggest switching out "messed up" for something with a lil more depth. :D

also "loosing" should be losing... :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[K. Aurora]

I like it! Is it fall where you are already! :)
Fall leaves do make such a pretty back drop in nature.

Great little wonder!

Kansas