My Writings...

Ohk!! Nice little rhyming in here

As I sit over here

With nothing in my mind

I click and click

And some treasures I did find

Though I thought

I was wasting time

I was rather imrpoving

This great hobby of mine

And now I struggle

To match up the lines

It is a trouble

To think of a Rhyme

And if I don't get it right

For me, it'd be a crime

But I kinda like my work

I think, it's fine...

Author's Note

Really, I can think of nothing else to write about...lolz
I hope u enjoyed this piece. yes! I think it's pretty cute...^_^

Reviews

[Emily Elizabeth]

Your work is absolutely fantastic!
You're one of the writers here who have improved the most in such a short time! And you were already fantastic to begin with. Such a cute poem but I've added some notes on how it could be improved slightly. As ever I really enjoyed reading this, you are a very keen poet. Keep at it, and you'll come through the writer's block.

[ashylynn_love]

I like it! I think it really expresses some feeling that you have its good.

[Angel Bird]

This poem is really great. It develops a great rhythm that it keeps til the end.

A lovely and nicely successful rhyming and rhythmic work! I like it very much.

[*Kantola*]

That was a cute little poem :) Good job with the rhyming! I can only rhyme words like cat, hat, that, bat... etc. lol. I'm not a creative person when it comes to rhyming, and dont have the patience xD
This was a beautiful poem! I LUFFED IT! And yes, it was cute!