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lame haiku

The heavenly orange merges with

The divine blue of the sky where

Sun is part of it all...

Author's Note

Oh God! I feel so pathetic after wiriting this... T_T

Reviews

[*Kantola*]

Nuuuuu you havent lost your writing skills!
It's just not a long poem, like you're used to writing. I know that when/if I try to write a haiku it sucks, so I've just stopped trying haikus lol.
xD
This is very lovely! A lot better than what i'd be capable of doing xD
Hm... for a title, how about something about a sunset? lol idk

[Enigma]

I've lost my writing skills...
T.T

[DC Gentleman]

Dont feel bad ...

but a Haiku has a syllable pattern of 5 - 7 - 5
this poem is slightly off..

I enjoyed the wordplay, that was beautiful..
its just not a Haiku.. :)