My tears

Being hurt and lost of love but recive redemption through God

Look at my tears run, roll and fall on their backs dwn my face my heart is pumpin but I can't breathe my mind is thinkn thoughtlessly abt the hazards of the unjust hands that held my soul heart to heart and lifted my spirit to the heavens, floating in the air with angels with wings, made ur angel and u gave me ur wings then u took them away nw I slip and fall gravity embraced me hard pulling me dwn to a crash and burn but God sent his angels and they pulled me up wiped my tears and cemented my smile, I roll on the clouds of heaven with a heart and soul at home in the hands of God.

Author's Note

What would u say to this piece and reconstructing it?