do you know what it's like?

Do you know what it's like

to feel alone

to feel lost

to be kicked when you're down

to be on the verge of tears

to lie to people who care just so they wont worry bout you.

to feel like your only escape is death?

 if you can relate then you got a glimpse of my life

Author's Note

It's not really a poem... and it's not finished but I'd appreciate your thoughts and suggestions...

Reviews

[KAin]

... there is the idea that writing can provide the kind of world that reality denies you.
Hopes and dreams take on new forms and can be accomplished each and every day. The blank page is a symbol of both hope and forgiveness - a clean start, away from pain. Smiles return when you dive completely into the world of a book, or a poem, one you're reading or writing.
Let the joy of other worlds hold your hand when darkness visits your thoughts.

[Dreamer]

Thank you for your comments, fellow writer.

[KAin]

You're welcome, friend. And good luck.

[Dreamer]

Thanks, best of luck to you as well.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Any piece of writing is worth the effort...the fact that you have felt pain and hence wrote this suggests you have a poetic bent of mind...but trust me...time is young for you...we all face such things...so write happier pieces.. :)

[Dreamer]

thanks for your comments, I shall try to write some brighter poems...

[Quiet Child]

you already know my thought..

[Dreamer]

what? to start spelling things out?

[Quiet Child]

nah, on the concept

[OTownPete]

Ever since the passing of my only son to lung cancer I have known all of these feelings and emotions only too well. Your friend in words, Pete

[Dreamer]

I'm deeply sorry for your loss.

[Sami Khalil]

This was really sad and a glimpse into your life and the human condition. Bravo

[Dreamer]

thank you very much sami (:

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Dreamer]

its very much appreciated

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.....:)