Without You

For Stormi.. my ex

I can't sleep at night
knowing your not alright
Wanting to hold you in my arms
and keep you away from any harm

Even if were not together anymore
I still want to see you more
Your smile makes my day
without you, my skies are grey

Reviews

[Danalla]

:D luv it

[.Lost Soul.]

nice, i love this

[....]

This is really good. like your rhyme scheme

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

nice,..reminds me of the short story by Del James "without you"...on which the epic ballad 'November Rain' by band Guns n Roses was based.

[Corrupthoughts]

Short and sweet. The first two lines are your best in my opinion, they speak of a kind soul if I say so myself. I think you can expand on this, don't be afraid to test yourself and simply spit out whatever comes to mind.

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Aww this is so sweet

[Fairytailsuntold]

Aww that's adorable. I really like it.

[Rin]

Delightful.

[Coffee Vampier]

I love this, its adorable and sweet. love the write adding it to my favorites :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe so cute. Good write. :D