Inner Darkness

 

Even the purest of heart and able of minds cannot hide from what is prophesied

For a battle is waged within ourselves between our holy light and our darkest self

None can say without a doubt that what we fear is a moral drought

For darkness is found in the kindest heart and holy light in our darkest parts

For darkness does not overtake our light, it merely hides it from our sight

Reviews

[MarkGMelvin]

This is fine poetry a wonderful creation.So to the point
and how can I say ?You dropped knowledge an it's
a good thing.A good read I enjoyed this.
peace
wmmelvin

Thank you for the review,it is
encouraging.

[ABitBrokenPoetry]

dark, simple, yet holds so much truth. this is a stunning & beautiful write. those last 2 lines really pack a punch. much hope speaks through them. great poem.

[Jennifer Rebecca Whitmi..]

I absolutely love this

[R J Askew]

This fascinates. Yes, there is darkness there, it it a part of every human being. We are incomplete without it. Dark had power, but it is a power that drains. It does not refresh. And in the end we renounce it or are consumed by it. You know what you are about with this poem.

[Star Catcher]

Wow. This is beautiful, and so true. I too have felt the constantly raging battle between the good and evil inside. I think we all have. It is nice to know that our good will never completely die, even if that means our evil also never will.

[Tina Kline]

I like this. It is so true
and you spell it out in
this wonderful poem.
It's beautiful, really is!

[Jennifer Marie Theresa ..]

Truly beautiful and thought provoking. Things will always stay the same no matter how many times you reopen your eyes you are faced with yourself and your memories. Wonderful writing.

[SilentDreamer]

Awesome! It flows really well and rymes too, I love reading poetry and this has to be one of my favorites. It's incredibly true, you did a great job!