Melting

Written on the hardest first day of school in my life.

I thought I was fine,
Thought I had control,
Of the feelings I hide, I have to...
I'd caused too much pain,
Just trying my best,
To expect you to feel what I do...

We never had that,
We never did share,
What I feel without doubt or mistrust...
I thought I was fine,
I'd dimmed the hot flames,
I'd buried the longing in dust...

But summer did end,
Came back to our haunts,
I saw you, and again, my love bled...
Your eyes and your voice,
Soft short light brown hair,
I fell all over again.
I melted.

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

this is a great and awesome poem I can really relate to this... I also caused too much pain on others and it really hurts to keep my feeelings... because I keep it... It hurts too much
(:

[Winter Frey]

I think I know how this is about...very good, though.

[Ruby]

It's really good I gave it 100/100

[Skia1717]

Thanks. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

I can relate to this well. awesome job. sucks huh

[Skia1717]

Yeah...

[Allyson Wolfe]

I like this a lot. Me and my ex go to the same University, so seeing him is hard. I feel your pain.

[Skia1717]

Thanks. The saddest part is I didn't even get a chance to date him.