roots

a kidney bean

once became lodged

deep inside

my ear canal

 

and i don’t think

i need to remind you

how a sweet polyp

like that

will sprout roots

among the white axons

grow throughout the squid

and drink in salvation

from the brainpan

 

god knows

i’ve tried what i can

even

turned to the

purgative artillery

strong medicine for sure

but

my throat muscles

only strained and expelled

a bulky stool

so gassy

 

and when

the shaman

sat atop me

with his covey of broken clam shells

scraped the flesh from back of

my neck

wouldn’t you know it

the beast only sneered

from the hole and spat

 

so i guess

i’m resigned now

to co-exist with my friend

and no

as you’ve gathered

it’s not a symbiosis

 

but i’ll get by

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you've a way to flay away the pc prose of modern woes and reimbue it with the gut wrenching tear stained beauty that it IS even in a condition's degenerative dissolution~ you are like the olden wizards of preRome who wandered lands of Dhawos making magik out of pain and suffering and breathing stunning revelatory gem drops into the wrenching fields of mortality~

[Commanda Panda]

A rather humorous piece from my point of view. I had to smile when you wrote it's not a symbiosis. Nice vocabulary. I don't think this is a read that most people will get without having a dictionary by their side.

[David Scott]

Now your wetting my appetite! Your still gross though. Nothing wrong with that.
Now at least I know to blame the "bean"... :-)

[sienikeha]

ha! wonderful. beautiful, streamlined voice.

[kmartell]

taking each step an exageration one woe at a time til there is nothing more that can be said i suppose.

I like cracking a walnut, eat, and understand the form of it. ;) Like every created piece of mother nature has connection to us, in a certain form.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Have you named your companion?
Fantastical writing, off beat, on edge...brilliant.

[Sophie]

I am so confused, but I really liked this, very descriptive, and slightly gross.

[Lacha Young]

i lkie this part alot "and i don’t think

i need to remind you

how a sweet polyp

like that

will sprout roots

among the white axons

grow throughout the squid

and drink in salvation

from the brainpan"

[Lacha Young]

certain parts of this made my stomach hurt a little bit, but its disgusting and good. you l;ike you said you'll get by just keep pushing to the next level . sound like some sick s**t though