My Love

She whispered to the wind,

“My love, my love...”

She cried for her sins

“My love, my love!”

She wailed to the heavens,

But there was no help

From above.

Now, she cries quietly.

“My love... my love...

My loss.”

Reviews

[A.K.F]

sad. The emotion displayed is done quite well though I feel more imagery could have been used to hook the reader in and really pour the emotions over the reader.

[Skylah Ginette]

Thank you! This is actually quite an old poem, I wrote it almost 4 years ago, at a point in my career when most of my feedback told me to focus on improving my imagery. I am hoping that as I upload some of my newer work my progress in that area will be visible :)